Here's Johnny!
aubspeeps
WWW
Hello chefs! Here is my wikipedia article – a list of every tonight show episode! That inspired me to look up Johnny Carson, which led me to the below article, which then inspired this song.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_The_Tonight_Show_episodes
The wind aspect I have incorporated are mellotron flute sounds
Lyrics –
Break the dishes, one by one
you will never be enough
try to please, you won’t succeed
tough luck
Make them laugh, they’ll never know
now that I am in control
Now it’s time to start the show
Addicted to jokes
to mirrors and smoke
the loneliest man at the bar
slap on a grin
forget who you are
that’s how you make a star
Ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha ha
It’s been one long late night
What a life
Ha ha ha ha
ha ha ha ha
Looking for feedback on
anything and everything
Discussion
laurawolf May 26, 2020 5:41pm
Ohhh I like how free the rhythm *feels* and how effortlessly you flow from sonic theme to theme (and vocal characters). Totally impressed. I think for many writers it would be easy for that many themes to just pile up and get muddy, but I love how you were able to have each of the elements shine through at their own moments. Like a conversation.
Ryan May 26, 2020 11:30am
This whole thing is so damn cool. All about your performance on ‘tough luck’. Definitely agree with @@daeclanon the St. Vincent nod. But also, I think you did an excellent job writing something that sounds classic yet still turns a bunch of expectations on their ear (like the descending organ part between ‘a’ and ‘star’ — way to subvert an expectation with a rad moment). I think your arrangement on this is your strongest yet. I love those super grainy-film violins that come in. I agree with @@nick on the less-is-more quality of vocal fx moments. Really great work here, Aubrey.
daeclan May 25, 2020 4:26pm
so lovely & light, but also deep & sad at the edges. i got both bowie & st. vincent vibes, too.
the ha ha ha’s hit me in my heart’s bull’s eye. elements of tragedy wrapped in comedy and lit brightly. a real nice listen.
nick May 25, 2020 4:14pm
how about that mellotron?? such a great instrument, and used really well here. I love when the strings accompany that descending line. In regards to moments when you want to highly effect a piece of your vocal, I have found that doing a little bit can go a long way. Definitely don’t want to quell your experimentation. It can be fun trying to hone a slight effect that may even end up having a stronger impact. Love this piece, and how you approached the assignment.
krismccarthy May 25, 2020 3:17pm
this is enchanting
juliapiker May 25, 2020 2:58pm
yup yup baby bring out that flute hunita<3
I fucking LOVE THIS!!!!!! you a st.vincent fan? I want you to watch Disney movies and write songs about them.
This honestly can work as a score too. I love seeing what your brain is doing during this. So many little surprises. I’m hearing some fun stereo left tricks up your sleeve. more more more!!!!!!
nick May 25, 2020 4:15pm
disney movies? looks like she’ll have a chance to heyyyyya=Once Upon A Time
Carseat May 24, 2020 9:41pm
I love the energy of this song. Slightly mocking to me, but in a very fun way. I very much resonated with it.