In order to create this piece, I chose to improve a piano part that I felt reflected the general history of my article, then add vocals/synths. From there, I recorded spoken-word vocal parts that layered on top of one another to create both a story and a specific atmosphere that I was envisioning. The vocals tell the history of a specific lone train engine, as well as a story of a mother and daughter on the phone.
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I'd like feedback for the mix, my intention was to create a sort of swirling field of overlapping parts, but I am new to mixing and don't know much!