• Submitted on time! Aug 16, 2020

Gah, sorry I didn’t follow two of the parameters. Oh well. Had so much fun with this.

When the clock strikes four
She can’t take it no more
Pawing at you
With eyes so blue
And forlorn
She’s so bored

What is it, girl?
Do you have to go out?
No no no, pout pout pout
What is it girl?
Are you hungry for food?
No no, I wanna play with you!

Don’t let your doggy down
Get her a Pupzzle
Get her a Pupzzle

Don’t let your doggy down
Get her a Pupzzle
Get her a Pupzzle

Looking for feedback on

The mix - this was rushed but would like advice on the balance, levels, overall jingle-ness.


Ben August 19, 2020 4:56pm

Let’s literally buy one.

alechutson August 18, 2020 12:34pm

So cute and innocent ♥️

nick August 18, 2020 10:11am

super cute, and perfect percussion at the end. also love that you fit FORLORN into the lyrics.

juliapiker August 17, 2020 2:02pm

lol. this is fantastic. WHAT IS IT GIRL section is just so freaking cute.


nick August 18, 2020 10:10am

agreeed.. what is it girl, are you hungry for food?

Ryan August 17, 2020 1:48pm

Love that roll into the intro. This is great. I think my only two mix notes are that the vocals are a bit swallowed up by the orchestration (especially in the beginning) — I think cutting some lows and adding some highs might help separate those out a bit. Hook sits nicely, though!

nurphgun August 17, 2020 2:08pm

Sweet, thank you! Agree about the vocals in the beginning.

skstoxdale August 16, 2020 10:14pm

loved this. Sounds like a pampers ad.

nurphgun August 17, 2020 2:07pm

Thank you! That’s what I was going for!

daeclan August 16, 2020 9:50pm

oh my god this sounds like youtube pet ads so much, which i mean in the best way. re: mix, i don’t have headphones but the jingle feeling is there! a modern jingle.

kurds August 16, 2020 9:24pm

This is so goofy, love the sounds you threw in. Definitely would have kids singing this and driving their parents mad. “don’t let your doggy down” oddly soothing to hear.

kurds August 16, 2020 9:49pm

By the way, we want to know, what exactly is a Pupzzle?

nurphgun August 17, 2020 2:07pm

It’s a puzzle for puppies to keep them busy when they’re being annoying 🐶