If You Flinch

  • Submitted on time! Aug 30, 2020
nurphgun
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I chose one of my faves, Feel Them by Carseat. Changed some words and phrasing to better suit the legato/spacey feel I was going for. What do you think?

It’s a lil all over the place but I had fun just kind of finding a vibe with this. Loved getting to experiment with synths and sounds I’ve not used before without the added pressure of writing something from scratch.

Big 80s drum programming by Ben. <3

 

Dip your feet in and let it go.
Nibble then retreat.
Feast on the dead,
Hope all new,
Bring in the light.

If you flinch
They’ll run away.
You’re on to them.
Just stay here, quiet,
And I’ll be back.

Why you sit there and let them manifest you?
Bad you’d spend all of this time, too.

In the water
You can’t feel them.



Looking for feedback on

If I gave you the Logic file, what would you add? What would you remove? What would you change?

Discussion

  • 11 Comments
skstoxdale September 9, 2020 8:46pm

oh man love this. So smooth and soothing, but just fun at the same time. Nice mixing and love the drums!

peter September 1, 2020 10:08am

the intro feels like the cure in the best way

ryan.mp3 September 1, 2020 12:23pm

Truly

kurds September 1, 2020 8:40am

This is so goddamned smooth. It just needs a music video with you and Ben swaying in leg warmers.

Carseat August 31, 2020 9:12am

OH MY GOD YOU DIDN’T

Carseat August 31, 2020 9:13am

THIS IS EVERYTHING I NEEDED

nurphgun August 31, 2020 9:36am

🐟 🙌

ryan.mp3 August 31, 2020 6:47pm

At first, these emojis weren’t populating and so it was just a blank comment. And I was like, “damn Nora that’s super clever — Darcy had said this was everything they needed and so Nora commented literally nothing.”

ryan.mp3 August 31, 2020 6:47pm

Anyways, dope track. I really like 80s-ish Nora-stuff.

Ben August 31, 2020 8:10pm

lololol

oblo August 30, 2020 9:14pm

I absolutely love this! The production is so smooth, and the kind of faded drum beat blends really nicely.