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  • Submitted on time! Oct 8, 2023
Rmal
Newfangle

I look at life with so much wonder
now and again I need to bring the thunder
I throw my food when I’m out with the crew
gimme a break I’m only two

I run around I jump up and down
when I get excited I scream kind of loud
trying to figure out but everything is new
gimme a break I’m only two

I’m only two
what you expect me to do
I’m only two

living day to day without a plan
every day I do the best that I can
I’m growing up y’all can see
you just wait till I turn three

I’m only two
what you expect me to do
I’m only two

I’m only two
what you expect me to do
I’m only two



Looking for feedback on

can't drum - tell me the drum track is cheesy - yep I agree.

Discussion

  • 3 Comments
Ben October 23, 2023 9:44am

This is the most hardcore song ever submitted to NCBC. How do you get voice to sound like that? How does your throat feel after singing this? This song really captures the energy of having a perpetual runny left nostril, yogurt all over your face, and walking around a carpeted room clutching a sweaty handful of cheese-its. Can relate.

Ryan October 10, 2023 1:00pm

Rick this is an absolute joy hahaha. Everything about this rocks. Makes me wanna say “let’s ride” in the deepest register I can muster and throw some aviators on… before climbing onto my tricycle.

nick October 9, 2023 7:55am

hahahahahahaha. rick. you’ve gotta post these lyrics. metal is an incredible fit for both you and two year olds. welcome to the club. voice sounds great. i love a lot of the guitar moves—the chunking rhythm, and line with the creepy final note. drum track is really well arranged! i might just switch out some of the swingier funkier moments for straighter heavier moves. “Rock on, papa” -Luca