Fever dreams

  • Submitted on time! Feb 25, 2024
Il Duce
Dream Weaver

I never could follow instructions….

Looking for feedback on

I think it might need a piano or fretless bass or something


Rmal March 4, 2024 8:15pm

Been listening to this a lot. It’s a great tune!

alechutson March 2, 2024 6:33pm

This could go any number of ways with arrangement but also works quite nicely as a solo guitar/vocal piece. Nicely done!

nick March 2, 2024 9:42am

hey nice! this is big step up in recording quality. Like @@Ben said, great annunciation. And sure, some fretless, some piano, some strings. Go crazy!

EliasSZ February 29, 2024 7:22pm

Don’t have much to say, but I really like this. Guitar sounds really good and the whole thing just feels comfortable/comforting/some other word I can’t quite place.

I could dig a fretless bass, but I wouldn’t want you to add too much to this. Just things to aid the current vibe.

Really liked the line “Wish I had a dollar | for every night of restless sleep.”

Ryan March 2, 2024 12:41pm

Yep, that’s the lyric that stuck with me too.

Ben February 26, 2024 12:50pm

The only thing missing is a warm campfire. This is so soothing! You really annunciate well and I could make out every word—but if anything, you might consider smoothing your words out a bit. Phrases like “one stuck in your head” are punctuated a bit and go against the silky smoothness of the rest.

Carseat February 26, 2024 11:26am

I could so hear that fretless bass. Almost like the saw in “In the Aeroplane…” by Neutral Milk Hotel. If you do it please let me know… I dig.

Rmal February 25, 2024 10:40pm

LOVE the vocalization! Great melody. Like the bridge at 1:25. The tune is great stripped down, but if you thought you wanted more, I’m hearing angelic strings. Wonderful subject 🙂